*big dramatic sigh*
I present to you Fantasy/Reality part 51! As usual, please feel free to leave a comment. I read each and every one of them. They really help me keep going when I'm writing and going crazy.
Fantasy/Reality Part 51
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If you haven't already please vote for my mom and me at the Victoria's Secret Contest. You can vote once a day until May 7th!
Go to this link http://tinyurl.com/d8xvcr or click on the vote button below:
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To those who left a comment on part 50, I will reply to each and everyone as soon as possible so be on the look out for that!
hey jocelyn!
ReplyDeletei voted for you already. tee hee
i havent commented in a while, but im pretty sure i always read your updates within the first couple days of its posting...(sorry about that)
loved the update...
and im sorry to hear you vommitted :(
it could be a sign to finish up the story so it doenst affect your life too much?
i feel its almost concluding, isnt it? unless like...aaron comes and ruins something. haha
and i admire your creativity with the 3 different nick characters. haha
mandy
I am so happy that you finally got to update! This was a really long chapter, I can't believe its over 5,000 words!!
ReplyDeleteI am so happy that she was finally ready for him. I was getting pretty irritated with that whole issue, not in the sense where he kept asking but because she wouldn't even give him a chance. Its about time she let her walls down and be with him, I can't wait to see where this goes and how he treats her now.
The part you wrote with him cringing about all the food he was buying seems like something he would really be doing right now, since he's lost all that weight. I liked that, it was a nice touch.
How you started off this story caught me off guard.When Nick goes to the gas station and sees the father and daughter situation, his mind starts going; he starts freaking out! It was interesting to see his point of view for once and not Viola. Although one thing about her character that really,really,really,really bothers me is how she just doesn't think about the babies before she does anything. She just doesn't think!! I hope she learned her lesson with the caffeine incident.
All in all it was nice to have an update. I hope that you can update soon again!
Brittany a.k.a _britters_
Hey Hey
ReplyDeleteI just have to say I've voted twice already for you and mom!!
Nice update its great to see how Nick's feeling and his side of the story. I think he's going to be a really good dad and husband...so ummm how about them married?!?!? just a thought...
You left us hanging again. I don't know why but anytime the topic of sex comes up I get all giggly and school-girl like..its weird like I need to grow up or something!!!
Oh Oh I love your Coach Keyfob obsession oh I mean collection! Lol! That's really cool though. I think you've inspired me to start collecting something!?!? who knows
Keep up the good work and good luck with the Victoria Secret Contest!!
Peace
LaShonda
hey girl
ReplyDeleteanother really good chapter. i really loved the part when he watched the other parents, its nice to see him thinking about it and working to his own parenting skills. also i am so glad she is finally giving into him! cant wait for another chapter!
Hey I loved the new chapter!! You are a very goo writer and definatly one of my favorite fan fiction writers.:) keep up the great work.:) Cant wait or the next upate.
ReplyDeleteSorry its taken so long for us to get in a reply all of us have been sick thus far and not really able to get up or do anything.
ReplyDeleteWe love how nick was sooo close to getting a piece yet soo far away lol. We do hate how Viola never thinks of the babies... she's so wrapped up in her own little world that she doesn't bother to stop and think. Hopefully she realizes that shes got a great guy by her side. Nick looks like he's getting close to jumping ship, especially with the second thoughts and the incidents that happened at when he was getting her stuff. The paparatzii seems to finally have taken an interest in them both finally so that should be interesting.
Sorry its a short review, as you can imagine we're all really out of it right now. We'll come back soon and do a proper review as a growing book club should :).
Love ya
Lolly Nick Kaighleigh'anna Marie Jess and the rest
OMG... I loved the newest installment.. I hope this story never ends.. seriously, it's just THAT good. I love all the nick things through-out the story.. Very realistic. The story remind me of my addiction to starbucks, LOL. I LOVE it. I can't wait to see what happens next. btw, good luck with the writing/tv thing. I wish you nothing, but the best. I am sure something will turn up for me. I also voted for your mother/daughter thing. I hope you two won, or also were close. Cannot wait for the next update. I will be waiting patiently.. Keep writing girlie.. Hugss, Holly
ReplyDeleteHi Mandy,
ReplyDeleteI understand that you haven't commented in a while but I am glad you read my updates as soon I post it. There's no need to apologize. It's very rare for me to vomit and it was such a disgusting feeling. I guess my body wanted to give me first hand experience on vomiting for the story. Fantasy/Reality has such a mind of it's own. There's been lots of times where I thought it would be over but my brain thinks of something to add 10 more chapters to it. Aaron could or could not pop up in the story. Thank you for the compliment on my creativity on the 3 Nick's. It really wasn't my intention to have so many different kinds of Nick's. It just happened!
Brittany - These chapters seem to be getting longer and longer but at the same time it's taking me longer to update so I feel it all balances out. Viola has a lot of walls up that need to be broken down and if Nick keeps up what he's doing then her walls will disappear. Nick seems like a big health nut now who's very conscious about what he eats so I had to throw that in. His posts on what he eats on Twitter really help with that. For a couple of chapters I wanted to focus on Nick's point of view since the story is so close to the point where the twins are being born. I didn't even notice Viola's lack of thinking before she does antything. She's got a lot on her mind so I can understand that she doesn't necessarily think out what she says and does.
lashonda - Thank you for enjoying Nick's point of view. I like being able to imagine myself through his perspective. I also wanted to show his point of view more since the twins are almost coming. It's interesting you bring up marriage. Maybe, maybe not. Who knows? :-P I'm glad you love my Coach Keyfob collection lol They are so cute but at the same time very bad for my wallet. Also thank you for the support on the Victoria's Secret contest even though it's long over.
Anonymous - Thank you for loving the part where Nick watched the other parents. I'm not a parent myself but I think most parents observe other parents to see how they react to their children. Thanks for reading the chapter and I hope you get a chance to read and review part 52.
Anonymous - I am very honored to be one of your favorite fan fiction writers! Thank you for the wonderful comments and I hope you enjoy the part 52 update.
Nick, Lolly, Jess, Kaigleig'ana, and all - Don't worry about taking so long to get in a reply. I totally understand and I would rather have a short review rather than no review at all. Viola is wrapped in her own little world but she has so many things on her mind so sometimes she doesn't have the most logical reasoning and her actions can be questionable. I hope the book club is still together even though it's been months since I've updated.
HolyBird - I am so glad you loved part 51! I am flattered that you hope the story never ends. As long as I have ideas I'll keep on writing it. Thank you for thinking the Nick things through out the story are very realistic. Sometimes I get paranoid about it being too cheesy and unbelievable but it's good to know you think it's realistic. I also love Starbucks too! It's very addicting. I especially love drinking frapps when the weather is hot. I appreciate the luck on the writing/TV career I am trying to pursue. It's such a tough industry to get into. I hope you enjoy part 52 and thanks for waiting patiently! *huggles*