Rating: NC-17
Status: Completed
Summary: Nick meets a writer who isn't like any other woman he's met before.
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Wow, I'm the first comment, that's never happened before. Anyway,so I read Writing the Wrong and I will say I didn't like it, at all. I like a lot of your other writings but this one was not good. I don't want to upset you or offend you, I just want to be honest.
ReplyDeleteI even went to youtube and listened to the song you got inspired from and listening to that and then reading your story and listening to the song again, I just couldn't put them together and see how you got this inspiration.
From beginning to end, nothing seemed right in this story. Nick doesn't even fit the part of a murderer and the girl was just a straight up whore/bitch who had no personality or umph as character and who in the end really deserved what she got. At any rate, my advice, if you are going to write about Nick stay away from this kind of theme. If you want to go in a different direction in writing, use a different piece of eye candy rather than him. Now will you PLEASE update fantasy/reality??!!!! :)
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I just couldn't put them together and see how you got this inspiration.
ReplyDeleteI ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI thought it was AMAZING!!! I always love you're writing (you're very talented) but the stories always have the same general feel to them and it was lovely to have a story where things don't work out in the end. Some say Nick doesn't fit that profile of a murderer and that ruins the story. I disagree completely they are right (for the REAL Nick Carter) BUT its still amazing to see the flip side of things, and just how far someone can be pushed before something bad happens. I didn't get much of a connection between the song and the story itself (but I don't personally think there was supposed to be a direct connection). Its nice to see a flip side of your mind and writing style. I say keep it up and continue writing like this (even if its only once in a blue moon).
<3<3<3<3<3<3 all the way across the board. Adore this story, wish I had a hard copy book with 10000000 pages to read the continuation.
Jessica