Happy 2010 Everyone!
To kick off the new year I present to you part 53 of Fantasy/Reality. I hope you enjoy it. Please spare a minute and leave a comment on it when you're done reading.
Fantasy/Reality Part 53
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Kim, who the hell is Kim??? Girl I can't WAIT to see what happens next!!!
ReplyDeleteJocelyn OMG you and your cliff hangers, I swear I think I now know what blue balls may feel like...jk!!!
But I'm so glad you updated for us, I'll just take it as a late xmas gift.
I'm glad to read that Viola had a reality check about how life could be like when the babies arrive. Cause she is for sure living the fantasy life while staying with Nick. (I wish I had a man to cook for me!). But on a real note, I think a lot of women can get caught up in thoughts of having a baby and forget that raising kids is not an easy task and may not be as "romantic" as we think sometimes. However it cant hurt too much if Nick Carter is the father!
On a side note: The blog post on your main page about "where are the BSB fans" got me thinking b/c I'm actually not a huge fan of their music anymore. They kinda lost me with the Black & Blue album. I'm still in teeny bopper mode I guess, I wish they'd do more "All I Have to Give" or "I'll Never Break Your Heart" type songs. But I'm still a fan of them as individuals and as artists cause that have such a positive vibe and a lot of love for their fans.
OKay so my comment is getting exceptionally long and I'll call it a quits. Thanks so much for sharing Fantasy/Reality with us. I truely truely enjoy it!!!!!
***Happy Happy New Year***
As someone who is a mother to a two year old, I LOVED how you put the reality check in there, and how she was having doubts. A lot of women think "Oh he promised me he will be there for the baby so no big deal" but don't realize TONS of the fathers in the U.S. don't actually keep those promises. Women don't tend to think about all that ahead of time. I LOVE that she is though.
ReplyDeleteOkay now who is kim!? When Nick brings Viola out I HOPE he takes this chance to proove to her he's choosing her over all other women. He's screwed up too much already to really do anything more crazy. If he does something horrible I think its gonna be the last time Viola see's him, cause there has to be a point (even if your boyfriend is Nick Carter) that survival mode kicks in and you kick that man to the curb. I REALLY hope that the dinner goes well in Viola's favor.
I'm sorry that We (Nick, Lolly, and I) haven't written on here in awhile. Life gets way to busy at times.
On a side note, I can relate to the "Writer's Laziness" you talked about. I'm in the middle of starting my own book called "Sick Secrets" and I've been having so many different idea's about where to start that I've been stuck on the introduction for MONTHS. I call it perfectionism, I want everyone to see the story from all sides like I do, so the opening and everything else has to be absolutely perfect. Nick says as a journalist he see's ALOT of people like that. So we're not alone lol.
Really loved the chapter!
Jocelyn? Who's Kim? LOL!
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ReplyDeleteLaShonda - You'll find out a little bit of who Kim is in part 54 ;) Cliff hangers are what keep readers coming back so I have to sprinkle them into the chapters. LoL @ thinking my cliff hangers are like having blue balls. I don't know what blue balls feel like but it must be a somewhat pleasant feeling :p
ReplyDeleteI really had trouble trying to think of how to pass the time in part 54. I knew I wanted Viola to have some type of fantasy sequence since it had been a while since she's had one. I was stuck for a long time while Viola was at the part where she was trying on outfits for dinner. That's when I came up with Viola taking a nap and having a dream/nightmare about the twins crying uncontrollably and Nick not being there.
I'm so flattered that even though you're not a huge Backstreet Boys fan anymore, you're still interested in reading my stories about a Backstreet Boy! I don't know if my fandom for Backstreet will go away. Writing and reading fan fiction is a huge part of me still being interested in them. I understand what you mean when you say you wish they'd do more "All I Have To Give" or "I'll Never Break Your Heart" type songs but at the same time I like that they've attempted to dabble in other genres. My personal favorite album of theirs is the 5th one called Unbreakable because I love all but 2 songs on that album. The lyrics on that album give me visions in my mind.
Don't worry about your comment being long. I love long comments ;) I should be thanking you for being such a dedicated reader and for reminding me that there's actually people out there who care that I share stories :D
Jessica, Nick, and Lolly - I'm not a mother but it's so reassuring to hear from you, an actual mother, that you can connect with what's happening to Viola. As I mentioned to LaShonda in the previous comment, I knew I wanted Viola to have some sort of fantasy sequence in part 52 since it's been a while since she had one. I wracked my brain for the longest time until I came up with the idea of Viola having a dream/nightmare about Nick being gone on tour while she was stuck at home with two screaming babies. It's something she'll eventually have to deal with in her life.
You'll find out a little bit of who Kim is and how Nick handles the dinner in part 54, if you haven't read it already. Only time will tell how Nick will react to the many women who are obviously attracted to him. As sad as it sounds, even if it's publicly known a man is taken, there are still shameless women out there who have no issues chasing after them. At this point, with all the pain he's caused Viola and everything he's been through with the amnesia and coma that he sees how much his love and Viola's love for him has really helped him.
I totally understand that sometimes you, Nick, and Lolly have lives to lead and other priorities to fulfill. I just get so paranoid sometimes that I've lost readers due to my slow updates. I always do my best to write as much as I can but like you said life gets in the way. In my case though, it's not the busy that gets in my way, it's my writer's laziness and the issues I have with my family.
Good luck on your book "Sick Secrets." I applaud you for having enough strength to write a book! The tough part with writing is how to start it and how to end it. I had the idea of Fantasy/Reality floating in my mind for a couple of months until I actually found the inspiration to write it. I understand what you mean about wanting everyone to see the story from all sides so that everything will make sense. I agree that the introduction is important because that is what hooks a reader to continue reading. Yay for Nick saying we're not being alone :D
angel - If you haven't already, you'll find out a little bit of who Kim is in part 54 :D